青春的思緒跳躍，時(shí)代的潮流滾動(dòng) | 記華南師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)國(guó)際部雙語(yǔ)班作文比賽

雖然疫情讓我們無(wú)法在校園里面聚首，思維的火花照樣在相互地碰撞。華初國(guó)際雙語(yǔ)班的老師們組織了一場(chǎng)線上英語(yǔ)作文大賽，引導(dǎo)同學(xué)們對(duì)時(shí)下社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行更深入地思考，培養(yǎng)他們的辯證思維能力和自主學(xué)習(xí)能力，從而進(jìn)一步激發(fā)他們的創(chuàng)新精神。

英語(yǔ)作文比賽

這次的英語(yǔ)作文大賽做為系列活動(dòng)的第一環(huán)，新穎的題目也是吸引了同學(xué)們的積極參加呀。同學(xué)們可以在兩個(gè)題目之間選擇：

1.Are celebrity actors or athletes good role models for students?

明星或者著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員是否為學(xué)生樹(shù)立好的榜樣?

2.What positive measures could you take as a middle school student to reduce the spread of the virus and ensure the safety of yourself and your families?

作為一名中學(xué)生，你可以采取哪些有效措施來(lái)抑制病毒(疫情)的傳播以及保障自身及家人的安全與健康?

(Angela老師)

本次活動(dòng)由Lin老師主導(dǎo)，Harlan教授、Angela老師和Teresa老師擔(dān)任評(píng)委，簡(jiǎn)直是雙語(yǔ)班的明星陣容了。Angela老師表示：“感謝孩子們認(rèn)真參與此次作文比賽，不厭其煩地按要求修改，多次的修改不僅促進(jìn)了師生情誼，更提高了孩子們自己的寫(xiě)作能力。接下來(lái)，請(qǐng)大家欣賞我們班顏值爆表、才華橫溢的作文。”

這2個(gè)題目都是學(xué)生們感興趣的熱門(mén)話題，所以學(xué)生在寫(xiě)的時(shí)候有想法，能夠用英語(yǔ)清晰地表達(dá)出自己對(duì)這2個(gè)話題的思考。兩個(gè)話題論述者各占一半，獲獎(jiǎng)作文都各有千秋。每位同學(xué)都很用心對(duì)待這次比賽，他們都用心修改作文3次以上。他們上交終稿的時(shí)候，我問(wèn)他們有何感想，他們都覺(jué)得很有成就感，在寫(xiě)作自信上和寫(xiě)作技巧方面都更上一個(gè)臺(tái)階。下面我們來(lái)看看同學(xué)們的獲獎(jiǎng)作品吧~

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1. 選擇題目一“明星或著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員是否為學(xué)生樹(shù)立好的榜樣”的同學(xué)充分展示了他們的辯證思維，兩面地看待問(wèn)題，理性追星，不忘初心。(為了節(jié)省空間，大家可以點(diǎn)擊圖片放大看文章哦~!)

文玥用辯證的方式表達(dá)她對(duì)追星的支持及其理由，引用文玥的話就是：“Anyway, the power of idol is powerful. We like this idol because there is something in them that attracts us. And I believe that we will turn love form them into power, so that we can become a better self !!!。”

蒼瀾用優(yōu)美的語(yǔ)句描述明星在她心里的樣子，Star, this word is no doubt dazzling, it is high-profile, it is focus.同時(shí)用李佳奇作為具體的例子闡述明星對(duì)她有什么影響。

子博和峻延通過(guò)作文表達(dá)了自己對(duì)著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員的喜愛(ài)，同時(shí)他們也被著名運(yùn)動(dòng)員的運(yùn)動(dòng)精神鼓舞著，不忘初心，勇往直前。引用子博的話：“The athlete’s spirit is precious. In a word, they are like the lamps in the dark, which lead us to find the way to glory. Their persistence in spirit is admirable and set a good example for us.”

峻延：“one day, we can also let the public see our advantages and then be the most bright star shinning the way for people who are in darkness.”

而寒月則認(rèn)為：“Learning stars‘ good qualities is better than quarreling for them! As students, we had better be a star fan without affecting our study.希望大家能做一名理性追星者，不要一味追星，要學(xué)會(huì)明辨是非，以學(xué)習(xí)為本。

2. 妍妍、宇然、思雨、王深、玉萱用總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)跟大家分享了對(duì)新冠病毒的認(rèn)知和看法，同時(shí)推薦大家采取戴口罩、勤洗手勤消毒、少出門(mén)等方式防疫病毒。從新冠病毒的負(fù)面影響看到中國(guó)人民的團(tuán)結(jié)、祖國(guó)的強(qiáng)大和中學(xué)生報(bào)效祖國(guó)的迫切愿望。

妍妍——Additionally, as students, we should study hard to be better to serve the motherland!

宇然——In my opinion, although the coronavirus is highly contagious, the most important thing is to keep a good mind and believe that we can overcome the virus!

思雨——In the face of the surging epidemic, we are not only a community of common destiny, but also a community of responsibility. As long as we work with one heart and one mind, we will surely win the epidemic prevention war.

王深——The virus is dangerous, but we become stronger after fighting with the virus. And I believe, under the leading of our country, what kind of difficulties can be over soon.

玉萱——We saw people tried their best to help each other. We also work together to fight with the virus. What’s more, the spirit of utter devotion.

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#塵埃落定，作文比賽結(jié)果公布!#一等獎(jiǎng)：梁文玥，蒼瀾，黃妍妍;二等獎(jiǎng)：汪子博，杜思雨，陳宇然，王深;三等獎(jiǎng)：朱玉萱，郭峻延，劉寒月。最后也是感謝所有老師和同學(xué)們的參與和支持!

在青春的年華里，不停地思考、辯證地思考才能不斷地進(jìn)步。華初國(guó)際雙語(yǔ)班作采用小班制，引入國(guó)際課程和師資，全力給學(xué)生打造一個(gè)最適合成長(zhǎng)與學(xué)習(xí)的環(huán)境。通過(guò)以學(xué)生為主，教師引導(dǎo)，助教監(jiān)督全方位促進(jìn)學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)和生活各方面能力的提高。